fic commentary: you, in the grass

ok im actually so annoyed with myself. i said i was going to start incorporating fic commentaries as part of my writing process and then didn’t do it. but i’m going to write this stupid commentary and i will see it through because i’m an adult who knows how to do things, and also this commentary should be easy to write because i literally dreamt up most of this fic in my head and that was like 80% of the writing process. i’m afraid this commentary won’t be very enlightening but ( here goes )